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The final destination ....!!!

Date Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 10:57 PM Icon 1225 Date 1

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Walking bare foot alone on a path  ;; ;;- Abstract Street, curvy, without a form and a facade, deserted .....Like a rollercoaster ...so vibrant to eyes, and every single turn scaring me to death .....Like a flow of storm water gushing out a huge pipe straight into the sea. my footsteps so audible and my breath catching my ears ...I was walking on to this strange path as like a ;; robot  ;;been programmed to take this route .

I start looking at the surroundings ....trying to find one more soul  ;;like me ,willing to ask directions ,but the road seems never ending and so deserted......I felt  ;;that am being ..Haunted, the journey seems endless and was walking like a zombie. Wondering ....is it a nightmare or is it another night shymalan's film am watching??Praying and waiting for this scary time to pass ...I kept my fears to myself desperately waited for the destination to come.

At a certain distance I found this huge gateway , the entrance ;; so beautifully designed......the lovely carvings .......the free standing columns-inspired by the Corinthian order .....And the arches quite resembling the Islamic times .....The symmetrical form which was a replica to the wondrous Taj. I kept on moving, I felt some strange heat piercing my skin and burning my bones to ashes. As I hurried my footsteps...... the flooring which seemed so beautiful with glittering stars spread to create an illusion ...started to hurt me...the sharp edges were bleeding my feet. The pain was immense and intolerable.


To distract me from the pain I thought of cherishing the memories of my life ...like an exquisite dinner date in a grand hotel .....A lovely expensive dress that I bought on a friend's anniversary ...or that latest car I owned just to annoy my close friend, the rare jewelry purchased to attend a mere birthday party. Forcefully I tried to smile .....I was feeling wrecked. The thoughts that would give me pleasure like vanished into the thin air...and suddenly I became nostalgic .....The images kept flashing into my mind ...as there was an auto screen saver set and I had no command on it. the incidents which I hated to recall were flashing straight in front of me ......like the  ;;innumerable  ;;lies to my parents  ;; ;;.......the one time I cheated on my spouse .........the neighbors I never valued , the friends whom I deceived .the colleagues whom I abused ...the kids who were somewhere down in my priority list . The people who were associated with me were always strangers and I never cared to smile at them. ;; Why my life did seem so null and void at that moment?? The pain I was undergoing  ;;doubled  ;;by million times....tears were rolling down my cheeks , I was bleeding all over ......my skin was tattered ..Bones cracking off ....my face looked so distorted. I started to scream .....Wanted to run away .....Hide...escape ....but all my efforts were going futile. In spite of no energy I was still was walking blank with any sense of time and hours into this unknown path. And then when I heard some footsteps ;;  ;;...it was a momentary relief......I was sure I got some help...I was happy to have someone to make me feel alive. I noticed that he was a pleasant looking tall fair gentleman .....With a smile on his face ...hair well did...curls falling onto his forehead, a sharp straight nose, luscious lips .....Dressed so well .....He gently patted on my shoulders and said politely .....WELCOME TO HELL.



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heaven or hell

Date Friday, February 5th 2010, 4:03 AM

Heaven and  hell  here  only ........ in this life .....
All we  need is the comforting presence of love ...  The love of our lives..to  hold our hand
To walk by our  side ....... to say  comforting words ...soothing ....in our  ears
giving strength ....to face  HELL  or  HIGH WATER as maybe ......

Then its HEAVEN else ..........

All  we need  is  that little bit  of  love

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